October 30, 2007

Impression: sunrise.

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What is this inky horror we call morning?

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Calm down. It's not so bad...

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5 comments:

ricpic said...

The day is birthed by wrathful sun,
Enwreathed in cloud-torn cords;
But as sun rises day calms down:
Night o'erturned: balance restored.

ricpic said...

The day is birthed by wrathful sun
Enwreathed in cloud-torn cords;
But as sun rises day calms down:
Night overturned: balance restored.





Better minus line 1 comma
and line 4 apostrophe.

blogging cockroach said...

nice poem ricpic
and the second one is definitely better
lose the 18th century apostrophe
hey where's the rosy finger'd dawn
no rosy finger'd dawn in those pix
they promised me a rosy finger'd dawn at school

ricpic said...

No rosy finger'd dawn for YOU!

-- Soup Nazi

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